Innocent BIL And Husband – Part 10

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This is part 10 of the story in Pooja’s own words.

I woke up in morning casually came out of my bedroom rubbing my eyes. I noticed Kishore was just walking across the hall with mixed emotions. I laughed inside. I knew he will be restless with all the things happening since last evening.

He would be a bit stunned with last night episode of dress sniffing stuff. I decided that I should not always exhibit a kind of flirty, lover type of behavior. I should behave as normal SIL at times without showing any excitement. This will prove that I am only flexible during acting.

I want to show him that I act professionally without any lust and interest on him. With this decision, I thought to behave very normally this morning until the need arises. So I just very casually gave a gentle smile to him and started my usual household work.

I started talking to him in a casual serious SIL mode. “Kishore, milk man has not supplied milk for the last two days. Enquire with him. Kishore what is this, last two days you have not vacuumed floors. Please do it when you are free. A lot of dust in the living room,” I complained.

He nodded his head and he will be wondering about my contrasting behavior between last night and now. I pretended as if I forgot everything and asked him “Kishore, what shall I cook for lunch today before I leave for the office?” Kishore was a bit shocked to hear that I’ve planned to go to the office.

He politely asked, “Anni, are you going to the office today?”

Me: “Yes Kishore, it is my regular one right? Is it a holiday today? Did I forget it?”
Kishore (hesitantly) ”No Anni, we decided Movie, audition acting…”

Me: “Ohh god, I totally forgot it this morning and got ready for office. Sorry for it da. I will inform them that  I am on leave for the next 3 weeks.”

I acted as if I totally forgot it. I did it purposefully to indicate to him that I’ve acted professionally yesterday. I am not in just thinking about it. This will bring a bit of respect and fear in him on me. So that I can enjoy the command of SIL though I play romantic with him.

I called my manager and requested 3 weeks of vacation. Kishore was happy to see my commitment and take personal leave for 3 weeks to spend time with him to support for the audition. He quickly said, “Thank you, Anni.”
Me: It’s ok da.

I laughed and said, “That’s fine, but what about your practice? Did you try the last night scene and got any improvement?”
Kishore: I think I got better after I sincerely practiced it for 10 to 15 times. I will act and show and you can provide feedback.

Me: No worries, we will start that after 9 o’clock after completing all household work. Until then let us sincerely complete the household work. Please do the vacuum cleaning and other stuff.

I ordered him as a commanding sister to ensure my dignity and respect. I prepared coffee, completed all morning routines, bathing, etc and had breakfast together. He was looking at the clock with nervousness and curiosity waiting for when we will start acting rehearsal. I felt it is now time to start the fun and spicy stuff.

Me: Kishore, as today is the first official day we are going to start rehearsal. Come let us start this with a small prayer in the Pooja room. I want to make a deal and offer something to god for making this a success. I mean you clearing audition.

Kishore: Ok, Anni.

After the bath, I made myself fresh with a bit more focus on grooming myself to look better. I applied a nice fragrance in my armpit and all over my body to produce a nice fragrance. As eventually, I will be acting physically close to him.  Already I am beautiful, made myself more beautiful by applying eyebrows, non-glossy natural lipstick, etc.

We walked to a small pooja room and stood in front of god and he stood next to me. I prayed aloud audible to him. “Oh God, this audition is very important to Kishore. I want him to be successful in this one. I offer my prayer that if he is successful, I will go for 2 days fasting for you and break 100 coconuts in your temple.”

Kishore was touched with my sacrificing prayer of 2 days fasting and 100 coconuts breaking. I continued, “Oh god, Kishore is really a gem of a person and he is naturally shy. You should give him all the courage and power to overcome his shyness and be better romantic boy for the audition. At the end of our practice session, Kishore should be very comfortable in acting any scene from the script. “

Kishore shyly fully smiled for my funny prayer request I continued.

Me: Oh God, Personally I’ve not been physically close with any men. Kishore and I are doing it now for a very noble reason for acting practice. You should give both of us enough courage to romantically act together every possible scene. And you should understand our noble cause and forgive us.

Kishore sincerely listened to my prayer. I completed my prayer and showed deepam to god and showed it to Kishore and he touched. We completed our sincere prayer, came to the living room, and sat on the sofa. Kishore sat on the sofa and started looking at me.

Me: Kishore please listen carefully. Let me tell you the protocol and the steps we are following in this acting practice. We will set up 2 to 3 cameras at each angle around us when we act. All the three cameras will shoot our acting. One camera we will set up to focus on our face to capture facial reaction.

Me: One camera we will keep focussing our body reaction and one camera we will keep at bit distance to capture the long shot. Let us read the scene, understand the director’s instruction, and perform the scene. Let us perform for 1 to 3 times.

Me: Once after we complete, we can sit together, play the videos recorded on the camera, and review the video to figure out how we did. I will review your acting based on my common sense and as a spectator. I will give you my feedback, you may agree or not.

Me: If we both agree that the scene did not come well, we need to act repeatedly until the scene comes well. Once the scene comes well, we can wrap it off and move forward with the next scene. Does this sound good?

While I explain this arrangement, I unintentionally imagined the situation of shooting the climax bed scene. I shook my head and thought to come to the present and not think too much.

Kishore: Anni, perfect plan I completely agree. We can do as you said.

We arranged 3 cameras with a tripod and made recording and quick replay arrangements.

Me: Ok Kishore. Once we progress with acting, we may need to wear the costume the story demands. E.g if the story demands that if I need to wear half saree or saree, I will wear the same. Similarly, if the scene demands you to wear dhoti, you should wear it.

Me: That way it will be naturally aligned to the real shooting. For now, let us start with our normal dress as we want to focus on the scenes with dialogs and conversation.

Kishore: Ok Anni, I agree sure we will do that. Anni which scene we should start now?

Me: Do you have any suggestions?

Kishore: Not specific Anni, but prefer to start with some dialog oriented scenes first.

Me: Makes Sense, but you need to remember that we cannot just drag on with dialog only scenes. I know you may do better and you lack in physical romance scenes. With a limited time of 3 weeks, we need to use time effectively. I hope that we should progress soon to bit romantic scenes.

Kishore: Sure Anni, I will try my best to do the scenes well and progress quickly to the next level.

Me: Ok then let us pick up the Scene #3 on Page 8 ‘Love proposal scene’.

Kishore: Sounds good

Me: Read the script/scene before getting into acting.
Kishore: Ok Anni

He flipped the page and started reading as in script book below

Scene name: Love proposal
Scene #: 3
Cast: Kavya (Heroine), Ravi (Hero)
Scene Background:

Ravi and Kavya are friends for a long time and each of them like each other. But not courageous enough to openly show their love. Ravi did not know that Kavya also loves him internally. Ravi finally decided to break the ice by declaring his love on her.

Through years of friendship between Ravi and Kavya, they are physically close in touching each other, hugging politely and wrapping arms on the shoulder. So today, Ravi will stand close in front of Kavya. He will hold her cheeks with his hands like holding a precious item.

He will look deep into her eyes and propose her love deeply, in a lovely way, passionately with the dialogs. (all dialogs here/removed them to keep it simple)

Instruction to hero: This is a very precious moment in your life. You are going to declare your love. So hold her cheeks gently. Your eyes should emote the unlimited love you have for her, give a gentle grip on her cheek with your entire palm.

Keep your face close to her face exactly in front. Your nose and her nose should have 1 inch of a gap in between. When you emotionally speak your love,  the heroine should feel your hot heavy breath. She should melt with your physical closeness and emotional speech.

Instruction to heroine: This is a precious moment for you. Your sweetheart is proposing his love for you first time holding your cheek. You are waiting for your entire life for this moment. Once he holds cheek to speak to you, move a bit forward close to him to receive his warm look and intimacy.

Move generously forward closer to him where your nose and his nose are 1 inch away. Your chest and his chest touch with each other and indulge in his conversation. Once the hero completes his statement. Keep your hands on top of palm holding your cheek and look into his eyes with emotion and bit drop of tears, express your confirmation of love with these dialogs (……)

Kishore stopped reading.

Me:: Wow, a really wonderful scene and the director had detailed it very nicely. Are you ready?

Kishore: (hesitantly) Ok Anni.

We kept the camera in different positions to shoot us. I dressed in tight pink colored T with Jeans today. I just moved closer to him to perform the scene. He struggled to directly and fondly touch my cheeks. I stood in front and said come on Kishore please proceed.

He nervously held my cheeks with slightly shivering hands. He moved his face a bit closer to me. I moved a bit forward. He hesitantly not moved very close to me. He slight kept his body away and looked into my eyes with fear and nervousness and recited the dialog.

I see no emotion, romance or intimacy in the scene and dialog delivery from him. Physically he has not moved very closer (1-inch nose gap) to perform the scene. I kept silent instead of giving frequent annoying instruction and let him be as he is. I reserved to give my feedback later.

He completed the dialog delivery and scene.

Me: Ok, just to say in one simple word, the scene did not come well. Please re-do this scene one more time. He again repeated holding my cheek and etc.

I repeatedly requested for one more time, he did, and I stepped away from him, took a deep breath.

Me: Relax Kishore, are you fine now?
Kishore: Ah Ok Anni.
Me: Do you think you did the scene well?

Kishore: Not sure, I tried my best. I think it can be improved better.
Me: Ok, Thanks for feeling the fact that this scene can be made better. In my view, I will give a score of 0 marks for this scene. You made it terrible.

Kishore was disappointed with my comment.

Me: Hey, not saying this to discourage you. Giving you open feedback so that I don’t give you false hope. Let us watch the scene and I will explain to you each flaw you made. Please make note of the flaw I point you and correct it next time.

I sat on the sofa and asked him to sit next to me. We started watching the scenes on the big TV. I felt a bit different to see myself and him physically close in the scene. It was a different experience watching both of us on the TV, though it did not come well. I played all three takes. I walked and went close to the TV with remote

Me: Look Kishore at this scene

I paused the video with my remote and the screen is showing the scene where he kept his hand on my cheeks. And I pointed his five fingers in the scene and said.

Me: Your fingers show nervousness. You have not kept your fingers wide open to touch the cheek instead you made your fingers on the chin like taking a pinch of salt. You forgot that the scene demands you keep your five fingers open and spread it on the cheek. Do you agree and got my point?

Kishore: (swallowed air with tension) Ah Yes Anni, you are right. Sorry I was nervous.

Me:: Look, don’t need to be nervous. You are not doing anything on your own. Whatever scene demands you need to do that. This is the first flaw. Let me come to the next point

I showed the clip of his face closeup during his dialog delivery and paused the video.

Me:: Look at your face? No excitement in proposing love. No intense look in eyes. Your eyes appear as if you are in the police interrogation room. (I laughed here). Moreover, see what is this?

I zoomed and pointed his forehead.

Me:: See three dots of sweat, which completely indicates you are not romantic in the scene. You are in deep nervousness.

Kishore: Anni, I agree I could realize now after you tell all this. I see what you are saying. Sorry, Anni. Let me try to fix them.

Me: That’s a good spirit. Another last thing I want to point. Look at your body language.

I pointed a video in a bit long shot, which shows our full head to foot.
Me: Tell me what this scene demands in terms of our closeness, how close we should stand and what should be the gap. Remember the scene and tell me.

Kishore: (become nervous and hesitant) Ahh Anni, a 1-inch gap between your and my nose.

Me: Good you caught the point. See this video and tell do we have that gap or more?

Kishore: (smiled) Yes Anni, I think the gap is more around one foot

Me: Thanks for accepting. I don’t want to point out further things. Just I would remind you to remember the distance mentioned in the scene and do it. Are you ready for a retake? Kishore, we do not have plenty of time to focus on these smaller things.

Me: We have many many intense scenes pending to do. If we are going kill time on these things like this, our 3 weeks will not be sufficient. See we killed almost 2 hours on this.

Kishore: Yes Anni, I agree. I will do best this time.

We reshot the scene this time. He understood my feedback and courageously held my cheeks. He looked intensely into my eyes and he did 60% better in the first take after feedback. I encouraged him and said he improved tremendously. I asked him to do again and try further better.

He tried with confidence second shot and it came too good with 80% accuracy. As the accuracy is getting increased, I melted in his real emotional love dialog looking at me. I requested for another attempt. He emoted perfectly at 110% accuracy and love with a deep intense look into my eyes.

He held my cheeks with gentle strong grip keeping his nose almost at brushing distance to my nose. Emotionally and slowly revealed the intense love dialogues (I excluded to keep it simple, but dialogs are of very intense and lovely nature.) I started feeling as if he is really conveying his love to me.

His dialog melted me as I was longing for his love all these days. That made me ooze tears in my eyes as he is emoting his dialog. I kept my hands over his foreheads on my cheek and passionately looked at him with moistening eyes. I  delivered my dialog emotionally with real feeling.

Me: Ravi, I was looking for this day for a long time. I was waiting for your bold move waiting for this as I am too shy to open my interest on you. Today I am blessed to be cuddled in your arms. My 21 years of preserved beauty is for you. I submit myself totally to you. I am all yours.

Ended the dialog with a drop of a tear rolling to my cheek. I emoted my real feeling like part of this conversation. To pretend that I acted perfectly I said “Cut,” like a director myself. I quickly acted as if normal and demonstrated bold sisterly body language.

I smiled and said to him with a confident body language, “Kishore, congrats you nailed it. I too tried to act naturally. Hope this time you improved a lot and you made it 200%. I appreciate it. Keep up the good work. I think if you do like this in all scenes, you will rock. How do you feel?

I did wait for his response. His close to real act made me confused, whether he started loving me or acted perfectly? Because it was so natural and emoted it well.

Kishore: (With a heavy relaxation tone) Oh my goodness. It was a very tough and nervous scene. I held all my nerves and brought courage and boldness like before bungee jump. I did it one shot with a heavy heartbeat. Enough Anni.

Kishore: (laughed) Anni, pick light scenes. This is too heavy to handle. Anni, you also did it well. You also perfectly emoted with tears. I was stunned to see how naturally you acted.

Though Kishore acted well he openly exhibited nervousness and shyness. So it doesn’t make good if I appear too bold. I also started acting in the same way and said, “Kishore, I 100% agree with you da. I have never been in this kind of situation. Not even spoke to any guy in school and college in a friendly way.”

Me: Talking such romantic conversation is the first time for me, slight comfort feeling is that I am talking with you like acting and not with a stranger. However, I gained courage and boldly did this scene and it came well.

Me: (laughed) Hey come on, If you are going to get a heavy heartbeat for this scene, man there are lots of scenes where you are going to faint in the shooting spot itself. No way for us to escape. We have to go through this pain and pleasure. Prepare your mind and give your best as you did now.

Me: I will also gain the courage to act the scene with you. We both should support each other to do the scene well. You really did it well. No slowing down as we don’t have much time to prolong the shoot. We will advance with scenes.

I acted perfectly as I am also a shy person like him and not a shameless creature.

I said, “Ok da, let us take a break and view our romance scene on TV (blushed and laughed) and then we will move on to next scene. Let us do one more light romance scene and then move on to big tougher one. What do you say?
Kishore: I am ok with it Anni. I am finally happy that you approved this scene.

We sat together and watched that intimate love proposal scene. Wow, it got rendered beautiful in all angles, close-up, distance and facial expression. Everything is 200% right. I looked at him and said.

Me: Brilliant da, see if you are bold and confident up to this level, I am sure you will be fine with Ahalya in the audition.

Kishore: Yes Anni, I got confident that I would do this scene 10 time more aggressive with her. (With a smile)

Me: Cool. Ok, what scene shall we do next?

Kishore: Your choice Anni,

Me: Ok, let us move forward with Scene # 9, Scene name “First intimate strong hug”

Kishore: (nervous and smile) Ok Anni, can we do it a couple of days later. Feeling more nervous. You are picking back to back hot scenes. Can you pick dialog only scenes? Let my heartbeat come down.

Me:: Ok da, I am also nervous and understand that it advances a bit. Let both of us take 15-minute rest, have water, relax, and chill a bit. Let us not be so nervous. Let us be chill and cool to make the scene better.

We drank water and relaxed for 10 minutes to come out of the intimate effect of love proposal scene. He got ready, and we both decided to start. We flipped pages and opened the scene. We sat together keeping the script book on our common lap. It seems he was getting comfortable sitting with me closer

Scene #9
Scene Name: First Intimate Strong Hug
Cast: Kavya (Heroine), Ravi (Hero)
Costume: Heroine in Saree with the wide-open hip area

Scene Background:
This is a bit romantic scene. Ravi and Kavya were close friends all these days and they were gentle with each other. Now for the first time, they are meeting in Kavya’s home in privacy after they declared their love for each other.

Last time when they proposed their love, the location was a public park where they cannot display their love openly. Now they are meeting in the privacy of Kavya’s home when parents are not around. As a token of their love, they both hug. They used to hug in the past, but it was a friendly hug.

This time they became deep lovers each of them having complete rights on each other. So their hug this time will be intense and deep. They hug so tightly in a way their ribs will break apart. In the process of hugging, Ravi first time feels Kavya’s bare hip by caressing it with his hands.

Instruction to Ravi:
Ravi, you slowly hug Kavya, wrap your hands on her back, caress her blouse backside, and gently wander your hands on her back. You push yourself against her. She slowly walks back as you push her and finally she leans on the wall.

As there is no more room to go backward, you completely lean on her and hug her tightly. When hugging her place your nose on her side of the neck and give a deep hot breath on her neck. Be in hugging pose for few minutes without taking the nose and mouth from her neck side.

Slowly and relaxedly in a dancing rhythm, you both rotate slowly 360 degrees. Slowly while hugging move your hand towards her bare hip and gently press and slightly squeeze here. Kavya gives a cute expression and we cut the scene and here and scene shifts to dream song in Switzerland.

Instruction to Kavya:
Kavya, positively react to Ravi’s move and you hug him tightly, too. You both ensure while you hug, there is no gap in between you and him from top to bottom. Enjoy the scene and make sure you emote the cute facial expressions in the shot.

Ravi stopped reading.
Me: Ok da, bit intense, let us gain the courage and do it. It seems we can do it. How about you?

Kishore: Ok Anni let us do it.

Me: Ok da, this scene demands saree. I will wear the Saree and come in the next 10 minutes. Oh forgot to ask. Do you have any preference of saree color da?

Kishore: (Kishore appeared a bit blushed and hesitant, as I never asked for his feedback in dress selection) Anni, anything is fine Anni, whichever you are comfortable.

Me: Kishore? See as I already mentioned. All this we are doing it to make you more romantic hero type of person and bring you out of the introvert nature. So, in that case, you should think of something which color will make you happy and engage in the scene.

Me: You should not be so formal. Your involvement as a character is important. Be as Ravi and think which color saree will make Ravi excited when Kavya wears it?

Kishore: Ok Anni, I personally like what Jimiki Kammal fame dancer Sherin worn type of saree yellowish white in color and free fall hair. I like it (he blushed to say the first time his personal preference of the type of girl he liked. I am happy for his revealing).

Me:: (I teased him with a smile) Oh you are Mallu fan (smiled). No worries. I think I have that type of saree. I will wear it.

I went in, wore it, and came in front of him. I wore it in low hip without, giving out ample generous visible hip space so that he can grab it according to the scene. I really looked gorgeous in this milky white and yellowish tint saree. Boobs were tightly packed in my blouse.

Both my melons were standing firm in a tightly packed blouse and it was prominently visible in the side pose. I did head wash this morning and left free fall hair. It is flowing gently in the mild air circulating in the room. I really looked so beautiful this morning.

I am excited to receive and give my first intimate hug with Kishore. He is a bit tensed and curious as he is going to hug me for the first time. I could see his nervousness. We corrected the camera positions, one camera to capture my hip area as I want to capture his hand/finger language when grabbing my hip.

So that I can pick that scene and coach him. The rest of the cameras in long and short shots. I moved in front of him raised my hands and corrected my hair and I did hint him

Me: Ok Ravi, I am ready for the scene

Kishore struggled with confusions where to start? How to start? Should I raise hands?  I gestured in eyes by squeezing my eyebrows.

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